Your ideas are great and you have a strong handle on the action of the subplot. I would encourage you to use quotations throughout the work, weaving them in to support the observations you are making. This will help you to further develop your ideas via the discussion of the quote but also show you which quotes are versatile and able to be used across multiple ideas.
In your answer about the Gloucester-Edgar relationship, look to comment on the role of dramatic irony. What purpose does keeping the identities a secret have in regards to the positon the play is in? I like your comments about the nature of family dynamics.See if you can expand into the ‘why’ behind your calls. I would possibly think about connecting it to communication.
Hey Siena,
Thanks so much for uploading these pictures!
A couple of things to think about:
In your answer about the Gloucester-Edgar relationship, look to comment on the role of dramatic irony. What purpose does keeping the identities a secret have in regards to the positon the play is in? I like your comments about the nature of family dynamics.See if you can expand into the ‘why’ behind your calls. I would possibly think about connecting it to communication.
Keep up the great effort!
Mrs. P